I look round the bush.I see something big like a mansion and I walk over. As I am walking over I see a key lying on the ground. I can see that it is silver and has a lot of dots on it.I wonder if the key fits the door to the mansion? The mansion has a weird creature standing outside the door.I think it is a P.E.K.K.A ,a type of monster. I look a bit closer towards the door of the mansion. It looks like there is a fake sword next to the door glowing and shiny to make it look real.I know it’s not a real one because it looks like a kid’s toy covered in chocolate buttons.
So I will stop talking about the setting and I will talk about myself. So I’m a human. I have blonde hair, blue eyes.I’m wearing jeans and an American jacket.
The creature standing by the door of the mansion is black and has two glowing swords in its hands. I can see it has a very spiky body. I start walking around the bush to see if I can find anything anything to kill the creature because I know this will be the only way in. I see something in the corner of my eye. A genie falls out of the sky and smashes to the ground.A minute passes and this genie starts to move from where he fell.He is hovering in a weird way and moves towards me. He whispers to me “You have one wish’’ I jump in shock and quickly say “I wish to have a sword that can fly out of the sky and hit the creature and kill it’’ As soon as I say this the wish comes true and there is a sword suddenly flying out of the sky.I watch in amazement as the sword slices into the creature’s heart and kills him stone dead. I’m amazed that now I can go into the mansion.I walk over nervously. The creature is on the ground with blood all around it. I remember the silver key and I hope it will open the door.Yay, it works so now now I am in the mansion. I think I see something moving around. It’s a person but I can’t quite make out what sort of a person.
Now I’m scared and I need a weapon to defend myself. I walk out and get the sword out of the creature and run back in... the shadow has gone.The house has stairs in front of me and is open around the stairs. I walk up the stairs slowly. There are no windows around the house.It’s very dark and dingy. I go in the room where I saw the shadow. I walk in and I see something. It’s a blender that is still turning but there is no noise. It is silent. I turn it off so actually no one is here so why was that creature there?
I walk up the stairs to the attic. The door is locked. I think back to the key that I found.It might open the door to the attic. I see that a drawer has fallen over. I remember I have a light from last week’s spotlight game. Whoops I remember that it ran out of batteries so that’s why it was in my pocket. I have a look around the attic. No-one is here. . The house is all mine. I have a look round the house, my house now.There are beds and everything you need to live in a house.I keep looking around and I notice it is night-time now. I find a bed and head off for a sleep... When I wake up I hear something creeping around the floor. It is either a mouse or the owner of the house. I walk down the stairs and see there is a human walking around the house. I grab my sword and run down the stairs. I see he is not there. I keep searching but I don’t find anything .He must have run away from here so the house is actually mine.
I walked in the dark large life education mansion, I open the door really slowly, theres are really creepy sound coming from inside BANG a loud noise from inside like a gun being shot. I peeked through the window of the mansion and I saw a man who had a very long neck and he is yellow, the creature went down the stairs with some children and adults.
While I was watching, next to me was my student worker Jack. He had a red american jacket, very bright yellow high tops which wasn't the best cloths to be wearing on a very important job.
As I entered the dark gloomy mansion, the shivers came down me as I tried not to look at the scary pictures that were hung up nearly every were in the house. I looked around the mansion. There were tones of old china around the hole house, also there there was a black stair case spiraling around the hole house, when I saw it I nearly had a heart attack from all of the spiders hanging from it.
Klip klop my head turned as quickly as a hawk trying to catch its pray. There was a sound that was coming from the top of the stairs. I quickly hid behind the nearest thing which was a large box which was not the best hiding spot. I heard some foot steps coming from the top of the stairs. I saw a shadow coming down the stairs it had a long neck, some little spikes on his head and he had a very dark suit on which had a pink tie, which was very long. I quickly ducked down so that Harold couldn't see me. I moved a couple of steps over BANG I fell over I maid a quick recovery, ducked down hoping he see me I quickly look up , AWWWW I shouted out loud I saw the horrible, long necked monster, I ran as fast as I could down the corridor, I was to late the monster had court me in the nick of time. I said to my self saying Im dead. Three hours later I think. I woke up all dizzy, I couldn't see enything it was like I was in wonderland I finally got my vision back, I was tied to a back of a chair, I looked right and left all I could was boys and girls all around the room.
I hoped that Jack had not been seen so then he could help him and all the other people get out. My hope stopped when I saw Jack on the floor bleeding from his head, his eyes were closed he was not moving, he was dead. I was really worried about Jack and how I was going to get out of the cellar. Suddenly my brain just switched on, I remember that I have a lighter and a little cut knife from when I went to the forest for a day out. I was luckily tied to a bit of rope so I quickly cut my self three. I'm out what other events will happen next.... By Louis
Two ducks sitting on the lake surrounded by stalks of corn, don’t see me in my corn disguise BANG POW!! Feathers fly in every direction possible like fireworks very dull fireworks. Levi sends out the Poodles to fetch the catch.
Five minutes later Levi hears some rustling in the bush he leans over and whispers “Ready the guns” I whisper back “Just use the hatchet saves ammo you know” We stood watching the shrub line for five minutes. Suddenly out of the corner of my eye the Poodles drag out a human body by the ankles.
The Poodles gleaming with delight waging and jumping around. I stared at the human’s face he didn’t look dead. Suddenly the dead man jumped to his feet and bellowed out “stand back” and pulled out a combat knife. I held my ground while my friend loaded the rifle.
Surprisingly Batman flew by Levi mistaked him for a duck and shot him. Batman spiraled down in smoke causing an explosion. The explosion distracted me and the man lunge.
Unexpectedly Superman flew by and of course Levi didn’t learn from his mistake and took a shot at him but the bullet just ricocheted into Levi’s face killing him instantly.
When I was running for my pitiful life. I spotted a bit of smoking metal sticking out of the ground I stopped and picked it up “Hot Hot Hot” I yelled and stuffed it in my pocket.
When I burst out of the corn field the poodles where barking at me and people were staring and yelling out FIRE!!!! I looked down and saw that my pants are on fire. I fainted.
I woke up in hospital the next day and the doctor said I had a fractured skull and my legs are so servilely burned that they had to amputate NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! I screamed. They said something else about the key burning through the earth and was never found again. Ryan
Chapter 1 My life is ruined. I hate my parents. How could they do this to me? Making me move house!! now I have to start all over and make new friends. The only good thing about this house is that I have my own huge room.But now I have to unpack everything and my long blonde hair keeps getting in the way of my bright blue eyes, It is going to take me ages. Sometimes I like to go outside and take a break, While I’m out there I think about my birthday which is coming up. Will I have made any friends by then?. Slowly I walk outside, In the front yard. I go to the postbox to check for any presents but instead I find something very different. It definitely wasn’t a present....... Chapter 2 Instead it was an old silver key in the shape of the world,with the initials M.S. engraved into it. I wondered what M.S stood for and then it hit me the S could stand for Sachar, which is my last name. It might have belonged to someone in my family. Later on I showed my mother the oddly shaped key. She went into the living room and came back with pictures of a lady, I studied the pictures for a while and then asked mum who the women was.She said to me “This is your great-great Grandmother, Mary Sachar.” I never got to meet her, She died before I was born. All I know is that she was a very mysterious women who loved the outdoors.I received these pictures years ago in the mail. I knew it was her when I showed the picture to your Grandmother. She started to cry, nobody knows what happened to her. By Emma
SINKING SAND BY BREANNA EVANS I was feeling slightly dizzy as my breath was seeping out of my lungs, creating bubbles in the water. Ruby seemed to be gliding through the water perfectly, unlike me. I keep getting stuck in the sand and it was getting shoved down my togs. Argh, it’s really disgusting.
“What’s taking you so long? questioned Ruby, as they bobbed along in the water after a massive breath. “I was getting stuck in the sand and it was going down my togs.” Sapphire explained, “I had to keep stopping.” “Oh, that’s what was taking so long. I thought you were hurt or something.” Ruby puffed. “Come on, lets keep swimming, I really want to swim with the dolphins!! Oh and a bit of advice, don’t swim in the sand, it’s a lot easier in the water,” Ruby laughed. “Um, I don’t want to sound babyish, but could we maybe hold hands so I don’t get stuck again?” Sapphire added in a small voice.
They swam through the water, kicking their feet furiously, hand in hand. They suddenly find a pearl oyster just sitting on the ocean floor. “WOW! I’ve never found one of these before!!” Sapphire tried to shout, but turned into mumble because they were still underwater. She kicked off the ocean floor so she could take a breath of fresh air.
They carefully dived down so they wouldn’t drop the peal. Their arms stretched out in front of them so they could glide gracefully. They were so concentrated on trying to get the peal from the oyster, they didn’t notice there was a massive sand pile. They headed straight for it until.........boof! They collided with the huge sand pile. “Ow! Ow!” they tried to shout. They tried to reach up to take a breath of fresh air. But they couldn’t. They struggled and kicked and tried to push the sand away. But it was no use. They were stuck. And sinking. And sinking?! “Help! Help!” they shrieked. But all they got was a mouthful of sand and water.
They were plummeting down, through the sand, all sorts of things poking and prodding their backs. And to make matters worse they couldn’t see a thing. Suddenly they stopped. They pushed and shoved the sand. And then............the world started moving in fast forward like someone just pushed the fast forward button on the TV remote.
Its time to face my fears. As I near my destination my heart skipped a beat, placing my hand into my pocket grabbing a silver key. Suddenly I heard a scream... I was running for dear life dodging the tall trees and climbing over the high rocks finally reaching my house. My house is two-story I guess you could say it is like a mansion. I rushed upstairs and into to my room grabbing my cellphone. I dialed 555-0173 I was calling my friends. I asked Shenae and Anna if they could come over because I urgently needed to talk to them. I wanted to tell them about the scream, and when I put my key in the lock that the lock started to glow. After my friends left I asked my mum if I could go down to the library. While I was walking down the street, standing right in front of me was the towns library, entering the library I slowly walked up to the counter and asked if they had any books about the house number 53.
The old librarian lead me into a small room and in the small room lay a dusty old filing cabinet, she told me that they could not open the filing cabinet because they didn’t have the key to open it.
She left me in the room all by myself. On the lock I found a number I could only just make out the number 53. Number 53 is on the mail box of that old and run down house. I just realized that the number 53 was on the necklace too. I felt a shiver go down my spine.
I got my shiny silver key out of my pocket and put it into the old, rusted lock ‘CLICK’ the door slowly popped open and inside that draw are all of these old files. I un-zipped my bag and placed all of the files in the back pocket and zipped it back up.
As I left the building I called my friends again to meet me at the National park. I wanted to show them what I had found about he old and creepy house number 53.
While I was entering the park I saw my two friends and ran over to them. Anna, Shenae and I lay down by a big oak tree. I Laid out all of the files, we were observing all of the research I had found. We were connecting the files to the scream and the glowing of the lock.
Then suddenly Shenae said that she had found a old newspaper that lead onto the scream that I heard at the old abandoned house. All of our eyes opened wide, Anna had a eyeglass and was investigating for further details into the newspaper.
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Spooky Mansion
ReplyDeleteI look round the bush.I see something big like a mansion and I walk over. As I am walking over I see a key lying on the ground. I can see that it is silver and has a lot of dots on it.I wonder if the key fits the door to the mansion?
The mansion has a weird creature standing outside the door.I think it is a P.E.K.K.A ,a type of monster. I look a bit closer towards the door of the mansion. It looks like there is a fake sword next to the door glowing and shiny to make it look real.I know it’s not a real one because it looks like a kid’s toy covered in chocolate buttons.
So I will stop talking about the setting and I will talk about myself. So I’m a human. I have blonde hair, blue eyes.I’m wearing jeans and an American jacket.
The creature standing by the door of the mansion is black and has two glowing swords in its hands. I can see it has a very spiky body. I start walking around the bush to see if I can find anything anything to kill the creature because I know this will be the only way in. I see something in the corner of my eye. A genie falls out of the sky and smashes to the ground.A minute passes and this genie starts to move from where he fell.He is hovering in a weird way and moves towards me. He whispers to me “You have one wish’’ I jump in shock and quickly say “I wish to have a sword that can fly out of the sky and hit the creature and kill it’’
As soon as I say this the wish comes true and there is a sword suddenly flying out of the sky.I watch in amazement as the sword slices into the creature’s heart and kills him stone dead. I’m amazed that now I can go into the mansion.I walk over nervously. The creature is on the ground with blood all around it. I remember the silver key and I hope it will open the door.Yay, it works so now now I am in the mansion. I think I see something moving around. It’s a person but I can’t quite make out what sort of a person.
Now I’m scared and I need a weapon to defend myself.
I walk out and get the sword out of the creature and run back in... the shadow has gone.The house has stairs in front of me and is open around the stairs. I walk up the stairs slowly. There are no windows around the house.It’s very dark and dingy. I go in the room where I saw the shadow. I walk in and I see something. It’s a blender that is still turning but there is no noise. It is silent. I turn it off so actually no one is here so why was that creature there?
I walk up the stairs to the attic. The door is locked. I think back to the key that I found.It might open the door to the attic. I see that a drawer has fallen over. I remember I have a light from last week’s spotlight game. Whoops I remember that it ran out of batteries so that’s why it was in my pocket. I have a look around the attic. No-one is here. . The house is all mine. I have a look round the house, my house now.There are beds and everything you need to live in a house.I keep looking around and I notice it is night-time now. I find a bed and head off for a sleep... When I wake up I hear something creeping around the floor. It is either a mouse or the owner of the house. I walk down the stairs and see there is a human walking around the house. I grab my sword and run down the stairs. I see he is not there. I keep searching but I don’t find anything .He must have run away from here so the house is actually mine.
By Jack McKee
ReplyDeleteI walked in the dark large life education mansion, I open the door really slowly, theres are really creepy sound coming from inside BANG a loud noise from inside like a gun being shot. I peeked through the window of the mansion and I saw a man who had a very long neck and he is yellow, the creature went down the stairs with some children and adults.
While I was watching, next to me was my student worker Jack. He had a red american jacket, very bright yellow high tops which wasn't the best cloths to be wearing on a very important job.
As I entered the dark gloomy mansion, the shivers came down me as I tried not to look at the scary pictures that were hung up nearly every were in the house. I looked around the mansion. There were tones of old china around the hole house, also there there was a black stair case spiraling around the hole house, when I saw it I nearly had a heart attack from all of the spiders hanging from it.
Klip klop my head turned as quickly as a hawk trying to catch its pray. There was a sound that was coming from the top of the stairs. I quickly hid behind the nearest thing which was a large box which was not the best hiding spot. I heard some foot steps coming from the top of the stairs. I saw a shadow coming down the stairs it had a long neck, some little spikes on his head and he had a very dark suit on which had a pink tie, which was very long.
I quickly ducked down so that Harold couldn't see me. I moved a couple of steps over BANG I fell over I maid a quick recovery, ducked down hoping he see me I quickly look up , AWWWW I shouted out loud I saw the horrible, long necked monster, I ran as fast as I could down the corridor, I was to late the monster had court me in the nick of time. I said to my self saying Im dead. Three hours later I think. I woke up all dizzy, I couldn't see enything it was like I was in wonderland I finally got my vision back, I was tied to a back of a chair, I looked right and left all I could was boys and girls all around the room.
I hoped that Jack had not been seen so then he could help him and all the other people get out. My hope stopped when I saw Jack on the floor bleeding from his head, his eyes were closed he was not moving, he was dead. I was really worried about Jack and how I was going to get out of the cellar. Suddenly my brain just switched on, I remember that I have a lighter and a little cut knife from when I went to the forest for a day out. I was luckily tied to a bit of rope so I quickly cut my self three. I'm out what other events will happen next....
By Louis
Awkwardness
ReplyDeleteTwo ducks sitting on the lake surrounded by stalks of corn, don’t see me in my corn disguise BANG POW!!
Feathers fly in every direction possible like fireworks very dull fireworks.
Levi sends out the Poodles to fetch the catch.
Five minutes later Levi hears some rustling in the bush he leans over and whispers
“Ready the guns” I whisper back “Just use the hatchet saves ammo you know” We stood watching the shrub line for five minutes. Suddenly out of the corner of my eye the Poodles drag out a human body by the ankles.
The Poodles gleaming with delight waging and jumping around. I stared at the human’s face he didn’t look dead. Suddenly the dead man jumped to his feet and bellowed out “stand back” and pulled out a combat knife.
I held my ground while my friend loaded the rifle.
Surprisingly Batman flew by Levi mistaked him for a duck and shot him.
Batman spiraled down in smoke causing an explosion.
The explosion distracted me and the man lunge.
Unexpectedly Superman flew by and of course Levi didn’t learn from his mistake and took a shot at him but the bullet just ricocheted into Levi’s face killing him instantly.
When I was running for my pitiful life. I spotted a bit of smoking metal sticking out of the ground I stopped and picked it up
“Hot Hot Hot” I yelled and stuffed it in my pocket.
When I burst out of the corn field the poodles where barking at me and people were staring and yelling out FIRE!!!!
I looked down and saw that my pants are on fire.
I fainted.
I woke up in hospital the next day and the doctor said I had a fractured skull and my legs are so servilely burned that they had to amputate
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!
I screamed.
They said something else about the key burning through the earth and was never found again.
Ryan
Chapter 1
ReplyDeleteMy life is ruined. I hate my parents. How could they do this to me? Making me move house!! now I have to start all over and make new friends. The only good thing about this house is that I have my own huge room.But now I have to unpack everything and my long blonde hair keeps getting in the way of my bright blue eyes, It is going to take me ages. Sometimes I like to go outside and take a break, While I’m out there I think about my birthday which is coming up. Will I have made any friends by then?. Slowly I walk outside, In the front yard. I go to the postbox to check for any presents but instead I find something very different. It definitely wasn’t a present.......
Chapter 2
Instead it was an old silver key in the shape of the world,with the initials M.S. engraved into it. I wondered what M.S stood for and then it hit me the S could stand for Sachar, which is my last name. It might have belonged to someone in my family. Later on I showed my mother the oddly shaped key. She went into the living room and came back with pictures of a lady, I studied the pictures for a while and then asked mum who the women was.She said to me “This is your great-great Grandmother, Mary Sachar.” I never got to meet her, She died before I was born. All I know is that she was a very mysterious women who loved the outdoors.I received these pictures years ago in the mail. I knew it was her when I showed the picture to your Grandmother. She started to cry, nobody knows what happened to her.
By Emma
SINKING SAND
ReplyDeleteBY BREANNA EVANS
I was feeling slightly dizzy as my breath was seeping out of my lungs, creating bubbles in the water. Ruby seemed to be gliding through the water perfectly, unlike me. I keep getting stuck in the sand and it was getting shoved down my togs. Argh, it’s really disgusting.
“What’s taking you so long? questioned Ruby, as they bobbed along in the water after a massive breath. “I was getting stuck in the sand and it was going down my togs.” Sapphire explained, “I had to keep stopping.” “Oh, that’s what was taking so long. I thought you were hurt or something.” Ruby puffed. “Come on, lets keep swimming, I really want to swim with the dolphins!! Oh and a bit of advice, don’t swim in the sand, it’s a lot easier in the water,” Ruby laughed. “Um, I don’t want to sound babyish, but could we maybe hold hands so I don’t get stuck again?” Sapphire added in a small voice.
They swam through the water, kicking their feet furiously, hand in hand. They suddenly find a pearl oyster just sitting on the ocean floor. “WOW! I’ve never found one of these before!!” Sapphire tried to shout, but turned into mumble because they were still underwater. She kicked off the ocean floor so she could take a breath of fresh air.
They carefully dived down so they wouldn’t drop the peal. Their arms stretched out in front of them so they could glide gracefully. They were so concentrated on trying to get the peal from the oyster, they didn’t notice there was a massive sand pile. They headed straight for it until.........boof! They collided with the huge sand pile. “Ow! Ow!” they tried to shout. They tried to reach up to take a breath of fresh air. But they couldn’t. They struggled and kicked and tried to push the sand away. But it was no use. They were stuck. And sinking. And sinking?! “Help! Help!” they shrieked. But all they got was a mouthful of sand and water.
They were plummeting down, through the sand, all sorts of things poking and prodding their backs. And to make matters worse they couldn’t see a thing. Suddenly they stopped. They pushed and shoved the sand. And then............the world started moving in fast forward like someone just pushed the fast forward button on the TV remote.
To be continued ...
The Mystery of number 53
ReplyDeleteIts time to face my fears. As I near my destination my heart skipped a beat, placing my hand into my pocket grabbing a silver key.
Suddenly I heard a scream... I was running for dear life dodging the tall trees and climbing over the high rocks finally reaching my house. My house is two-story I guess you could say it is like a mansion. I rushed upstairs and into to my room grabbing my cellphone. I dialed 555-0173 I was calling my friends.
I asked Shenae and Anna if they could come over because I urgently needed to talk to them. I wanted to tell them about the scream, and when I put my key in the lock that the lock started to glow.
After my friends left I asked my mum if I could go down to the library. While I was walking down the street, standing right in front of me was the towns library, entering the library I slowly walked up to the counter and asked if they had any books about the house number 53.
The old librarian lead me into a small room and in the small room lay a dusty old filing cabinet, she told me that they could not open the filing cabinet because they didn’t have the key to open it.
She left me in the room all by myself. On the lock I found a number I could only just make out the number 53. Number 53 is on the mail box of that old and run down house. I just realized that the number 53 was on the necklace too. I felt a shiver go down my spine.
I got my shiny silver key out of my pocket and put it into the old, rusted lock ‘CLICK’ the door slowly popped open and inside that draw are all of these old files. I un-zipped my bag and placed all of the files in the back pocket and zipped it back up.
As I left the building I called my friends again to meet me at the National park. I wanted to show them what I had found about he old and creepy house number 53.
While I was entering the park I saw my two friends and ran over to them. Anna, Shenae and I lay down by a big oak tree. I Laid out all of the files, we were observing all of the research I had found. We were connecting the files to the scream and the glowing of the lock.
Then suddenly Shenae said that she had found a old newspaper that lead onto the scream that I heard at the old abandoned house.
All of our eyes opened wide, Anna had a eyeglass and was investigating for further details into the newspaper.
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