Friday, 15 May 2015

Character description time


Using your Y chart from yesterday, write a character description for our mystery man.  Think carefully about using the characteristics, actions and physical features we discussed.  Happy writing!

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  1. Hollie
    The man was tall and strange he was wearing a red scarf and googles I was driveing home from work I past.
    This car crash there was a man standing there he looked as if he was wondering what I was doing I told him
    I will take you to the near by filling station I asked him if he was okay but he did not answer me Then he checked his watch I drove past this corner I said are you sure you're okay but he did not say any thing he looked at me I
    Looked in his googles I saw a car crash then the car crashed and then he went hitch backing again to do the same thing.?

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  2. One hot afternoon in the Californian dessert Soloman was dressed with a cheery red scarf covering half of his pale wrinkly face and wore a grey undergarment and a big brown bulky jacket that had little sharp rips on the shoulders on top. Soloman also wore shiny brown leather gloves and tinted foggy goggles to make his appearance.

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