Friday, 1 May 2015

Speed writing and eating!

Today for our speed writing warm up we had to use specific senses to describe our piece of chocolate with a partner.  Check out these awesome paragraphs in the comment section below!

5 comments:

  1. The smell is divine, the rich cocoa wafting into my nose. I can smell the energizing dark chocolate, wanting to crunch into the smooth, milky piece.
    Ethan

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  2. It smells like a rich cocoa bean. Smooth, dark chocolate with a bitter scent. It reminds me of creamy easter eggs and christmas candy.
    Ashleigh

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  3. The elegant chocolate feels soft and hard at the same time. The shape has four razor sharp corners.
    The smell takes me to an unknown destination (paradise). It's luxurious smell make me want to place the beautiful food in my mouth.
    Matthew

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  4. The chocolate has a rich, smooth texture. The creamy cocoa and milk flavours linger in my mouth for a time afterwards. It reminds me of dark, bitter chocolate but I can still taste the milk content.
    Feelings emerge as the chocolate touches my mouth. I feel the cravings for more and save the one piece for awhile. It is a refreshing sweet feeling.
    Haylee

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  5. It tastes rich and nutty. It makes me thirsty for a drink. It has a rich, smooth texture. I could taste the milky chocolate as my teeth sink down into it making me want more.
    Thomas

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